"I hope you don't mind if I use this in my English class as an example of a good research paper. I figure that you have probably already turned it in and received a grade but I found this sentence from the introduction to be…"
"Thanks for the constructive criticism. I always want to know if there are flaws in my writing. Like I said I have a hard time molding my thoughts around the research. I did think my thesis might have been a little presumptuous. I made the mistake of…"
"Worthy of note: the state sanctions against atheists holding office are unconstitutional. Article VI of the US Constitution states this unequivocally:...no religious Test shall ever be required as a Qualification to any Office or public Trust…"
"James - As a professor of English, I will give you a few pointers. Generally, the paper is good and follows a nice argument structure. There are a few bits of wording to watch out for, such as mistaking "it's" and "its."…"
"If you wanted to share your paper here, I'd recommend making it a PDF and connecting to it (hosted somewhere else) with a link. Possibly in the All things theism Forum. Another receptive group would be Refugees from the Bible Belt."
"Before I wrote that paper I hadn't really thought too much about other atheists. But since reading everything I did and writing it, it made me want to find and learn more about being an atheist. I want to learn much more than I know."
"I would be willing to post it on here but I'm not sure about length restrictions. My paper was four pages long. It really should have been longer but I had difficulty molding my thoughts around the research."
If you wanted to share your paper here, I'd recommend making it a PDF and connecting to it (hosted somewhere else) with a link. Possibly in the All things theism Forum. Another receptive group would be Refugees from the Bible Belt.
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