Hi, Paul.

I have a hard time writing humour and could use a few critiques on how to lighten the following work:

http://facts.freeiz.com/

Any ideas, suggestions, or even witty and snarky commentary would be most welcome.

Paul, Green Room is one of the best shows to hit the air in the last decade and I watch it religiously (and yes, I understand the irony in that statement) :)

Please share links to some of your work.

Hi Paul, and welcome to this rational world of Internet atheism---a haven from the superstitions and fictional god of the masses. 

"Well-founded common sense inevitably leads to atheism."

We invite you to make good friends by joining the busy group "ORIGINS: Universe, Astronomy, Life, Earth, Humans, Religion, Gods, Atheism, Evolution, Darwin..." with its 450 discussion topics and 2600 members.

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Terence Meaden