Blood Moon Chapter 2 rewrtten
I was dissatisfied with the existing chapters, the story wasn’t bad but the writing was terrible so I rewrote them.
“I do apologize to you young man but I can not go with you. I am banished.” The old man said.
“My master has the full authority of the Shia Empress Djamila Attia.” Iosif said. “What ever you where banished for-”
“I banished my self!” The old man interrupted.
“I was ordered not to take no for an answer.”
“Do not try.” The beast said. “He is a stubborn old fool.”
“Regardless my orders are my orders.”
“You haven’t a weapon.” The old main said. “How do you propose to force me?”